Thursday, September 13, 2007

The Lost Planet Pie

I wrote this story a few months ago. I think it's my favorite story that I've written.

Prologue
Planet Pie has eight lands called: Spameataland, Strawberland, Chocoland, Dariland, Fruland, Veggieland, Breadland, and the Capital. Each land is shaped like a piece of pie.
The people that used to live on Planet Pie were looking for new technology, plants, and medicine on different planets. They found the planets Kewakastan and Rewarastan. While they were looking for new technology Planet Pie vanished, until. . .


It all started out with a curious girl named Lauren. She lived on planet Kewakastan.
One day when she was about twelve she was burying her feet in the sand, and they touched something hard. She dug some more. Then she found part of it.

Lauren took a long time to get it out because it was huge. In fact, it was so big that . . . it was a spaceship!
It was a small spaceship for a girl just her size. It was blue and red with white stripes.
There was a note inside and it said: Planet Pie, but the rest was torn off. What is planet pie? She thought. Next thing she knew she was climbing into the spaceship.
She looked at all of the levers, switches, and buttons. She found a switch that said “on/off.” She switched it to on.
Lauren took off! She looked at all of the buttons; she found one that said “speed of light.” Now that seemed like fun. So she pressed it!
That spaceship went extremely fast! So Lauren pushed a button that said “slow.”
Then Lauren went back. She took the handles and turned back. Then she pressed a button that said “fast.”

Finally, Lauren found the very small Planet Pie. It was very bare with only a few mountains, rivers, and ponds.

She went back to her spaceship, started it up and went back to Planet Kewakastan. She told the new reporers about it. Then they came and told the people in Rewarastan. Almost half the population came to Planet Pie. They came because they like their old way of life better. From then on they lived on Planet Pie, until. . .

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